Sample report / Writing

What the Can you write a professional email in English? report could reveal

This is a synthetic learner report generated from the same prompt bank, scoring, interpretation, lesson, and recommendation builders used by the live diagnostic.

Sample score

70%

B2

sample level

10

review points

Email quality

The email is clear enough, with a few tone and action leaks

Clear but needs tightening

The email works in normal situations. The next level is making it shorter, more specific, and client-safe. The first limiter to investigate is listening. Add at least one open writing or speaking response to make this rubric harder to fake.

Tone safety

usable

The tone is mostly client-safe and easy to read. Repair: Replace vague politeness with a clear, calm, professional sentence.

Concrete ask

usable

The request is understandable and mostly specific. Repair: Make the request visible in one sentence and attach a reason or deadline.

Reader action

usable

The next step is clear in most normal contexts. Repair: End with the next step the reader can actually take.

Next proof

Write a harder follow-up email and keep the tone specific, polite, and short.

Important caveat

This is diagnostic writing feedback, not human-edited certification.

Report story

B2 with a clear path to C1

Your strongest signals are naturalness and pronunciation. The fastest improvement path is cleaning up listening and writing, then retesting in a focused diagnostic.

Already working

Natural phrasing is making the English sound less translated.

Pronunciation clarity is not the main thing blocking communication.

Exam-style structure is becoming visible in the answers.

Holding back the result

Listening speed is likely to break down in real conversations.

Writing works, but concision and tone still cost polish.

Real-life English works in predictable moments, but pressure can still break it.

Fastest visible win: Workplace readiness: Practice one meeting phrase, one email phrase, and one polite disagreement.

Lesson brief

Business English is the first repair target

These are not random mistakes. The report found reusable lesson targets in business english, listening and real life. Fix these first, then retake a focused diagnostic instead of jumping into another mixed quiz.

Business English

Make the wording client-safe

Email writing: A client has not replied to your proposal. You need a polite follow-up.

Better: I just wanted to check whether you had a chance to review the proposal.

Open lesson

Listening

Catch the real spoken signal

Email writing: Listen to the speaker. What is implied?

Better: The speaker is politely saying the decision probably needs to change.

Open lesson

Real life

Turn the answer into a survival script

Email writing: Buy medicine that does not make you sleepy with $12 using a train-station kiosk.

Better: Non-drowsy cold medicine and water.

Open lesson

Pattern diagnosis

The repeated signals the report would group

Business English

Workplace readiness

minor

4 of 11 reviewed prompts exposed this pattern. Average signal: 72%.

Email writing: A client has not replied to your proposal. You need a polite follow-up.

Next move: Practice one meeting phrase, one email phrase, and one polite disagreement.

Writing

Writing clarity

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3 of 3 reviewed prompts exposed this pattern. Average signal: 61%.

Email writing: Craft a polite message asking to move a meeting to tomorrow morning. Include the message, one concrete detail, and the next step.

Next move: Add one reason and one concrete detail. Short answers usually understate your real level.

Real life

Survival control

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2 of 5 reviewed prompts exposed this pattern. Average signal: 66%.

Email writing: Buy medicine that does not make you sleepy with $12 using a train-station kiosk.

Next move: Memorize the corrected sentence as a practical script, not a grammar rule.

Listening

Listening tolerance

sharp

1 of 1 reviewed prompt exposed this pattern. Average signal: 0%.

Email writing: Listen to the speaker. What is implied?

Next move: Replay missed audio twice: once for meaning, once for exact reduced words.

Exam readiness

Exam structure

minor

This area held up across 1 reviewed prompt. Average signal: 74%.

Email writing: Write 2-3 sentences to a store: your delivery is late, you need it by Friday, and you want an update.

Next move: Reuse the task words directly, then add your own detail. It makes the answer easier to score and easier to understand.

Question-by-question preview

The report is more than a score

1. Real life / B2

0%

Email writing: Buy medicine that does not make you sleepy with $12 using a train-station kiosk.

Sample answer: A magazine, headphones, and perfume.

Better: Non-drowsy cold medicine and water.

Pattern: Short, diagnostic, and reusable across tests, funnels, and practice loops.

2. Listening / B2

0%

Email writing: Listen to the speaker. What is implied?

Sample answer: The speaker fully agrees and wants to continue immediately.

Better: The speaker is politely saying the decision probably needs to change.

Pattern: Short, diagnostic, and reusable across tests, funnels, and practice loops.

3. Writing / A2

62%

Email writing: Craft a polite message asking to move a meeting to tomorrow morning. Include the message, one concrete detail, and the next step.

Sample answer: Sorry, we are late. I send it soon.

Better: Could you please send me the details today so I can follow up with a clear update?

Pattern: This proves you can build the useful sentence yourself. This answer is scored as active production, so a fuller response gives a more useful diagnostic signal.

4. Business English / B1

0%

Email writing: A client has not replied to your proposal. You need a polite follow-up.

Sample answer: Why did you not answer my proposal?

Better: I just wanted to check whether you had a chance to review the proposal.

Pattern: Email English can cost trust faster than grammar mistakes.

5. Business English / B1

0%

Email writing: You need feedback on a draft before a Friday deadline.

Sample answer: Send feedback.

Better: Could you send me your feedback by Thursday so I can finalize the draft on Friday?

Pattern: This is the difference between English that is correct and English that gets work done.

6. Writing / B2

60%

Email writing: Write a short update saying the project is on track, but the review step is the main risk.

Sample answer: Could you please send me the details today so I can follow up with a clear update?

Better: Could you please send me the details today so I can follow up with a clear update?

Pattern: This is the kind of micro-writing that turns test results into a useful report.

7. Writing / B1

62%

Email writing: Craft a short message saying the report is delayed but will be ready by Friday. Include the message, one concrete detail, and the next step.

Sample answer: Sorry, we are late. I send it soon.

Better: Could you please send me the details today so I can follow up with a clear update?

Pattern: This is practical English: not perfect prose, just a sentence that works. This answer is scored as active production, so a fuller response gives a more useful diagnostic signal.