Sample report / Writing

What the Can you make English clear and sharp? report could reveal

This is a synthetic learner report generated from the same prompt bank, scoring, interpretation, lesson, and recommendation builders used by the live diagnostic.

Sample score

60%

B1

sample level

12

review points

Writing clarity

The idea is visible, but the sentence does too much work

Understandable but risky

The writing communicates the basic idea, but long structure, vague nouns, or translated phrasing still slow the reader down. The first limiter to investigate is pronunciation. Add at least one open writing or speaking response to make this rubric harder to fake.

Concision

visible

The point is visible, but the sentence can be shorter. Repair: Remove filler, repeated meaning, and weak openings.

Structure

visible

The logic is partly visible but not cleanly ordered. Repair: Put the main idea first, then add reason, contrast, or example.

Naturalness

visible

The writing is understandable, but several phrases still feel learner-like. Repair: Replace translated phrases with chunks a native speaker would actually use.

Next proof

Cut one sentence by 30% and preserve the original meaning.

Important caveat

This is diagnostic writing feedback, not human-edited certification.

Report story

B1 with a clear path to B2

Your strongest signals are listening. The fastest improvement path is cleaning up pronunciation and naturalness, then retesting in a focused diagnostic.

Already working

Listening is strong enough to catch the main message in practical contexts.

Holding back the result

Pronunciation is likely reducing perceived fluency more than vocabulary does.

Translated-sounding phrases are one of the most visible weaknesses.

Vocabulary gaps are forcing simpler phrasing and weaker answer choices.

Fastest visible win: Exam structure: Add one reason and one concrete detail. Short answers usually understate your real level.

Lesson brief

Business English is the first repair target

These are not random mistakes. The report found reusable lesson targets in business english, naturalness and pronunciation. Fix these first, then retake a focused diagnostic instead of jumping into another mixed quiz.

Business English

Make the wording client-safe

Writing clarity: You need feedback on a draft before a Friday deadline.

Better: Could you send me your feedback by Thursday so I can finalize the draft on Friday?

Open lesson

Naturalness

Stop sounding translated

Writing clarity: "She explained me the rule"

Better: Unnatural

Open lesson

Pronunciation

Keep the target sound audible

Writing clarity: Did you hear ship or sheep?

Better: ship

Open lesson

Pattern diagnosis

The repeated signals the report would group

Exam readiness

Exam structure

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3 of 6 reviewed prompts exposed this pattern. Average signal: 65%.

Writing clarity: Some people say remote work improves productivity. Write 2-3 sentences giving your opinion and one reason.

Next move: Add one reason and one concrete detail. Short answers usually understate your real level.

Vocabulary

Word choice

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2 of 4 reviewed prompts exposed this pattern. Average signal: 50%.

Writing clarity: A friend says each word about the same situation. Order the intensity from mildest to strongest.

Next move: Review missed words as phrases, not isolated translations.

Writing

Writing clarity

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2 of 2 reviewed prompts exposed this pattern. Average signal: 60%.

Writing clarity: Write a short update saying the project is on track, but the review step is the main risk.

Next move: Reuse the task words directly, then add your own detail. It makes the answer easier to score and easier to understand.

Real life

Survival control

minor

2 of 5 reviewed prompts exposed this pattern. Average signal: 70%.

Writing clarity: Your delivery arrived, but one item is wrong. Ask support to send the correct item.

Next move: Reuse the task words directly, then add your own detail. It makes the answer easier to score and easier to understand.

Pronunciation

Sound clarity

sharp

1 of 1 reviewed prompt exposed this pattern. Average signal: 0%.

Writing clarity: Did you hear ship or sheep?

Next move: Practice the exact minimal pairs or read-aloud lines from missed prompts.

Question-by-question preview

The report is more than a score

1. Naturalness / B1

0%

Writing clarity: "She explained me the rule"

Sample answer: Natural

Better: Unnatural

Pattern: A quick swipe that exposes translated English instantly.

2. Pronunciation / A1

0%

Writing clarity: Did you hear ship or sheep?

Sample answer: sheep

Better: ship

Pattern: Short, diagnostic, and reusable across tests, funnels, and practice loops.

3. Vocabulary / B2

0%

Writing clarity: A friend says each word about the same situation. Order the intensity from mildest to strongest.

Sample answer: petrified terrified scared worried nervous

Better: nervous worried scared terrified petrified

Pattern: This reveals whether vocabulary is flat or precise.

4. Vocabulary / B1

0%

Writing clarity: You feel a little uneasy before a presentation, but not truly afraid. Which word fits best?

Sample answer: terrified

Better: nervous

Pattern: This makes users feel the difference between knowing a word and controlling it.

5. Business English / B1

0%

Writing clarity: You need feedback on a draft before a Friday deadline.

Sample answer: Send feedback.

Better: Could you send me your feedback by Thursday so I can finalize the draft on Friday?

Pattern: This is the difference between English that is correct and English that gets work done.

6. Writing / B2

60%

Writing clarity: Write a short update saying the project is on track, but the review step is the main risk.

Sample answer: Could you please send me the details today so I can follow up with a clear update?

Better: Could you please send me the details today so I can follow up with a clear update?

Pattern: This is the kind of micro-writing that turns test results into a useful report.

7. Writing / B1

60%

Writing clarity: Craft a short message saying the report is delayed but will be ready by Friday. Include the message, one concrete detail, and the next step.

Sample answer: Could you please send me the details today so I can follow up with a clear update?

Better: Could you please send me the details today so I can follow up with a clear update?

Pattern: This is practical English: not perfect prose, just a sentence that works. This answer is scored as active production, so a fuller response gives a more useful diagnostic signal.